Sunset

Joni Keith on Jan 26, 2009

Tags: fire, Haiku, kiss, love, Sunset

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A kiss at sunset.

Sunset, ball of fire
You kiss the horizon’s edge,
As I kiss my love.

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Comments (20)

Likha on Jan 26, 2009
What a romantic haiku and picture. Powerful!
denus on Jan 26, 2009
nice joni, finally got that haiku published!

see you got the picture with it too!
Top stuff (y).
2brnt2b on Jan 26, 2009
very nice.
Bick Parker on Jan 26, 2009
Perfect comparison, the kiss of sunset and yours. Smashing.
Denise Kawaii on Jan 26, 2009
Perfectly put, and a wonderful picture.
Suppee XX on Jan 26, 2009
Smoldering imagery. so simply put.
withheld on Jan 26, 2009
nice & simple. lovely picture
postpunkpixie on Jan 26, 2009
Very pretty! Good haikus are so hard to do (I can only ever manage mediocre ones!) but you seem to have the knack!
Inna Tysoe on Jan 26, 2009
That was lovely.

Thank you,

Inna
workaholic on Jan 26, 2009
nice work.
Joie Schmidt on Jan 27, 2009
Like the passionate sigh of love*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
eprom on Jan 27, 2009
Where is the rest of the poem? I don’t want to write much more, or it will exceed the length of the poem.
Sotiris on Jan 27, 2009
What’s a haiku?
Betty Carew on Jan 27, 2009
simply beautiful Joni
Darren Goad on Jan 27, 2009
Very nice.
nesita on Jan 27, 2009
beautiful picture
rutherfranc on Jan 29, 2009
very nice Joni..
Carolyn Cordon on Jan 29, 2009
What a gorgeous combination. I love Haiga, and your Sunset here is a great example of haiga.

It is so hard to put simplicity on the page like this. You have done well.
eddiego65 on Feb 4, 2009
Beautiful work!
Rana Sinha on Feb 6, 2009
To the point. Nice and brief.

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