The Autumn Leaves

Nikita K on Sep 4, 2009

Tags: autumn, colour, Crunch, crunching, Haiku, leaf, leaves, Life, orange, oranging, poem, Poetry, way, Weather, yellow

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A haiku on the autumn leaves.

Crunching below feet

are oranging autumn leaves

Splitting to make way.

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Comments (17)

giftarist on Sep 4, 2009
Like it!
Darla Cooke on Sep 4, 2009
Lovely haiku.
emmahaynes on Sep 4, 2009
Beautiful haiku =]
Christine Ramsay on Sep 4, 2009
Lovely work.
Christine Ramsay on Sep 4, 2009
Lovely work.

Christine
Papa Sparks on Sep 4, 2009
I love haiku a lot and enjoyed this one a lot. Autumn is my favorite time of the year and a time I feel the most homesick for the American Midwest.
papaleng on Sep 4, 2009
so sweet!
nightcharmer on Sep 4, 2009
Nice! Has tat “autumn” feel to this haiku.
Ruby Hawk on Sep 4, 2009
the scene you describe will be here soon.
Guy Hogan on Sep 4, 2009
This is better than a flash fiction story. Specific, concrete sense detail is what it’s all about. Very nice.
cebuanaeyez on Sep 4, 2009
Simply well put!
PR Mace on Sep 4, 2009
Well done.
Lostash on Sep 4, 2009
Autumn is certainly upon us again! Nice piece!
CA Johnson on Sep 4, 2009
I enjoyed it! I like Autumn because it is not too hot or too cold. The only problem I have with the season is when it is time to pick up the falling leaves. LOL! Great job!
Collette Edwards on Sep 6, 2009
short, sweet LOVE IT!!
CutestPrincess on Sep 19, 2009
i like it… so deep!
razumtina on Oct 23, 2009
Lovely…

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