The Ghost

*Bimu* on Apr 2, 2007

Tags: clock, ghost, gloomy

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The gloomy description of the ghost.

clock meander, chime
softens softens, ghosts
discover bleakly

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V rank on Dec 28, 2009
cute… i suggested you make this into a haiku… 5-7-5 syllables… write on my friend!
The Cinders on Nov 2, 2010
I disagree with Franklin. You don’t need to conform to anything with this, it’s excellent and mysterious. Not “cute” at all.

TheCinders.

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