The Thick Liquid Drips

Saffy Stardust on Mar 16, 2009

Tags: afternoons, arts, drips, forms, Haiku, Haiku and Related Forms, languorous, lips, liquid, literature, poem, roseanna, thick, treacle

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Short haiku, Monday 16th, 9:36PM.

(thanks user Hayley Austin from flickr.)

the thick liquid drips

on languorous afternoons

like treacle from lips

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Comments (4)

Reilley on Mar 16, 2009
Very nice, I liked it.
lindalulu on Mar 17, 2009
Nice work.
Bullwinkle Muse on Mar 21, 2009
that certainly warmed me up.:-) you managed to infuse a lot of texture in so few words.
Lady Bumblebee on Dec 3, 2010
Nice share I like it.

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