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Three Haikus

william rodriguez II on May 14, 2008
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Short but meaningful verse.

A Dozen Eyes

Your pineapple eyes
Watching the body of Christ
For your naked lies.

Sky Hallow

Fire of tomorrow
Open up my sky hallow
Rage against the flow.

Bird

Lying in the weeds
Boiling in the cage
A bird without egg.

 

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 14, 2008

    nice pieces of poetry buddy,

  • tracy sardelli on May 15, 2008

    thanks for the variety of poetry, nice read.

  • Josey on May 16, 2008

    nicely written.

  • Rhodora Bande on May 17, 2008

    I like the sound of these haikus. But I find the image of the bird without an egg. Is it being cooked?

  • Rhodora Bande on May 19, 2008

    I find the image disturbing, I mean
    .

  • acecampillo on May 22, 2008

    I am amazed of those people who can really write a poem in a haiku form because I cannot really do it. :) Nice one. God Bless!

  • goodselfme on Nov 29, 2008

    You have many talents. These are wonderful!

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