Women.

Gorgeous male specimen
experimentation’s made by women
women’s heartbreak

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  • Ohh-- on Jan 31, 2009

    I liked it…

  • Michael Eboh on Jan 31, 2009

    Five(5) Stars for you. Thanks.

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 31, 2009

    That is profound if one takes time to ponder what you have really said here.

    Great work!
    AC

  • Moron Savant on Jan 31, 2009

    uhhhmmmm…

  • rutherfranc on Jan 31, 2009

    guys, she wants us opened up..

  • Nadir on Jan 31, 2009

    Much too much expressed in few words….Good …

  • Darla Smith on Jan 31, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Debra. on Jan 31, 2009

    An insightful analogy by so few words.

  • Bo Russo on Jan 31, 2009

    Good stuff.

  • F J McCarthy on Jan 31, 2009

    Nice poem, I did not mean to be a heart breaker.

  • CutestPrincess on Jan 31, 2009

    nice one! hehe

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 31, 2009

    I like it. You almost have a Haiku.

  • SugarPlumRein on Jan 31, 2009

    hehehe… few words yet, it says it all!

  • Sakuragi on Jan 31, 2009

    Unique!

  • Morgana on Jan 31, 2009

    Lol You are a little twisted…we share that quality.

  • macon on Jan 31, 2009

    hmmmmm…got me thinking…

  • papaleng on Feb 1, 2009

    short but the insight, Ohh great..

  • BC Doan on Feb 1, 2009

    A deep thought!

  • PR Mace on Feb 1, 2009

    Very insightful.

  • PR Mace on Feb 1, 2009

    Very insightful.

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 10, 2009

    WOW! This is deep and profound! Had to think about it for a minute…but WOW!

  • Sandra A Flowers on Feb 19, 2009

    truly profound,,

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 20, 2009

    Very well expressed in so few words

  • adrian101 on Feb 22, 2009

    i stoped and reed it like 5 times, still reading it lol, but good job

  • xoxo on Mar 17, 2009

    Very true. Nice one :)

  • Teresa M Sims on Apr 9, 2009

    very well spoken

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