Some people are just too stubborn to ask for help.

He’s gone, submerged in attitude.

This is just to mental.
Cast out among the lost

Growling, eyes rolling

in the back of their head

just because you said,

can I help you

never ever wanting help

Just one single person,

misjudged,  no  not likely

You should be ashamed of yourself

Man overboard!

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009

    We make ourself handicapped, when we refuse to take help if we really need it.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 13, 2009

    I don’t understand that attitude either. Act of simple courtesy not declined in like spirit, but spitefully. Seems like it be simple courtesy in both direction.

  • ceegirl on Nov 13, 2009

    We should not be shame. Get all the help you can get.

  • Themax on Nov 13, 2009

    exactly you mean it my friend,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 13, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • Kristina Angel on Nov 13, 2009

    Nice one :)

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  • PhoenixRox on Nov 14, 2009

    I agree with you diamond. All of us need help at some point in our lives.. And we lose nothing by reaching out

  • Hansika on Nov 14, 2009

    well said

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