This is a revision of my poem called A Mind Unconscious.

I hang glided off a black skyscraper, and, swooping down,

I used a sharp Samurai sword to cut off the heads of people who were riding on bicycles.  Their legs continued moving for several second while blood shot out of their tattered necks and then their bodies fell on the grey concrete underneath tall oak trees tainted by Spanish moss. My alarm went off, waking me, signaling a new day.

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  • AlmaG on Nov 19, 2009

    great post and the meaning’s very deep :)

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 20, 2009

    good composition.. the dream portrayed as if itz true.

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