Happy and Sad

chennysan on May 5, 2011

Tags: blue, Clear Sky, sailing, sea

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Haiku, is a form of Japanese poetry written in three lines and 17 syllables.

Went sailing today,

Was a bright and clear sky above,

Sea still blue below…

Want to learn more about haiku read http://bookstove.com/poetry/haiku/

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Comments (10)

neopisiva on May 5, 2011
Simple and cheerful.:) I Like it.
Jimmy Shilaho on May 5, 2011
Cute piece.
Guy Hogan on May 5, 2011
I like it. I write Haiku, too.
Wrath Warbone on May 5, 2011
Good one.
chennysan on May 5, 2011
yeah! I Love it…want to polish my skills lot’s more
Martin Kloess on May 6, 2011
check 2nd line. tkae out word – was
payaltyagi on May 6, 2011
I am Loving it
MaxBuceo on May 7, 2011
I like this post. Interesting share.
Please visit:

http://socyberty.com/issues/in-40-minutes-it-fell-ger/

Thank you.
sanaahmed on May 8, 2011
nice one
chennysan on May 8, 2011
thanks everyone for your comments

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