Fictional account of domestic issues in acrostics.

Happiness is what you try to bring me every day
And even when things don’t go right you send a smile my way.
Please know that I don’t overlook the pleasant things you do
Pretending you still love me when you know you’ve been untrue.
               
                image via wikipedia

You cover all your tracks so well so I can never see
That someone else is in your heart where I once used to be.
I guess I should be happy that you haven’t left me yet.
Maybe there’s still time for me to help you to forget
Everything about your new love and recall our own again
              
               image via wikipedia

So once again I’ll hear you say, Yes, I love you, Ken.

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  • Sheila M on Jul 31, 2009

    I didn’t know Ken and Barbie had such issues lol ~ glad this is fiction because it is all too real for some

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 31, 2009

    lol I been wondering about barbie,she is pretty skanky sometimes.Excellent work Ken as always made me laugh!

  • Uma Shankari on Jul 31, 2009

    Charming, yes!!

  • sandie on Jul 31, 2009

    we all ove you ken, happy now lol.

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 31, 2009

    Very interesting acrostic poem!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 31, 2009

    Barbie and Ken do have their little spats, but they always seem to work them out. They’ve been together a long time.

  • PR Mace on Jul 31, 2009

    I hope this is really about Barbie and Ken and not Ken and the love of his life. Interesting work.

  • Ramalingam on Jul 31, 2009

    Yes, you have always been romantic in all your writings.I hope your longing for the revival of your former love gets fulfilled.Thanks for sharing.

  • Brenda Nelson on Jul 31, 2009

    ha ha Ken, that is so funny, took me a second to get the name connection with yours, that made me smile.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 31, 2009

    He should have known she would be trouble.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Aug 1, 2009

    I love you too.
    Don’t get excited.

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 1, 2009

    LOL!!! This piece are so charmingly funny! Didn’t realize Barbie was the love of your life…tee-hee! ^_~

  • Lostash on Aug 2, 2009

    You and Barbie are a right pair Ken!

  • nadinesimone on Aug 5, 2009

    I hope you and Barbie have a marriage of minds, if nothing else! Where do you get your ideas from? I stand in great awe.

    Nadine.

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