To my graduating daughter and her hard climb to the top.

I

This is not to brag, but to inspire;

Not to demean but to encourage;

Not to alienate but to engage;

Not to win but to strive.

II

She was a nameless lass from a batch of  350.

“Paola who?” was the oft-repeated query.

On grading’s end in her freshman year,

She ranked 40 in a class of 41.

III

The pain of defeat was too much to bear,

Enduring ridicule was too sore a part,

Withdrawing was the easy way out,

But the test of character was off to a start.

IV

Sophomore year was a frenzied time,

Researches, term papers came to the fore.

Beyond 24 hours she buried herself,

To land Top 26 in a class of 44.

V

Junior year was the time of reckoning;

Mind muscle was bolstered and somewhat fired up.

Teachers would notice and often remarked,

“That’s Paola, the girl who never gave up.”

VI

Senior year was the final shot;

Willpower stronger and faith renewed.

The uphill climb was an onerous trek;

“With Honors” is now a conquered quest.

VII

My child, I am filled with great pride,

Not with the rank you have earned for yourself

For in this life beyond school that we strive to attain,

True eminence is gauged not by the grades.

VIII

You ran the race and fought the good fight;

This esteemed  place is icing on the cake.

Remember to put your learning to good use

Hard work can sure beat a genius.

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  • Yovita Siswati on Mar 24, 2009

    Your daugher is a tough fighter. You must be very proud of her. With that kind of attitude, I am sure she will be sucessful in life.

  • Edward J Rodrigues on Mar 24, 2009

    congrats…for you make a great mom…the child learns from their parents…

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Mar 24, 2009

    Hardwork can always recompensate the shortcoming.

  • papaleng on Mar 24, 2009

    you should be really proud of your daughter, she shows a nerve of steel,and her perseverance was fantastic.Pa burger ka naman. Burger! Burger! burger!!!

  • Unofre Pili on Mar 24, 2009

    That’s right. “Genius is 1% percent inspiration, 99% perspiration”, Thomas Edison, the greatest inventor in history once remarked. Nice poem.

  • K Kristie on Mar 24, 2009

    very beautiful and inspiring poem…congratulations!

  • rockjuneDrock on Mar 24, 2009

    NIce poem… really Inspiring

  • OhSugar on Mar 24, 2009

    To: Paola, congratulations on you successful journey to a higher education. To: likha, congratulations on your successful rearing of a strong your lady. You both,I am sure, are proud of each other. Great inspiring story. Thanks for sharing.

  • Betty Carew on Mar 24, 2009

    What an inspiring poem for an inspiring young lady there is nothing that gives you the same feeling as something achieved by hard work both of you have every right to be proud.

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 24, 2009

    Your both very strong – great team!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Jose Monaca on Mar 24, 2009

    This is really inspiring! Thanks for sharing!

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 24, 2009

    Inspirational work, congratulations to your daughter and to you too Likha for guiding and supporting her.

  • macon on Mar 24, 2009

    congratulations to your daughter and to you too! for sure, her inspiration would be you, for her hard climb to the top. this poem isurely is right, hard work can beat a genius! nice work!

  • Paul Roberts on Mar 24, 2009

    The rush of wind moves her hair on this special day ,wind created from the clap of hands, well done, well done! Friend,fan,smile

  • Emma J Kerry on Mar 24, 2009

    A really beautifully inspiring poem. You must be so proud of your daughter.

  • STEVE666 on Mar 24, 2009

    A great poem proving endurence and perseverance can conquer all.

  • PR Mace on Mar 24, 2009

    You have every right to be proud.

  • Peter Cimino on Mar 24, 2009

    Very inspiring piece.

  • Cool Guy on Mar 24, 2009

    Hey, check my story out, its really funny =)

    http://www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Bob-Mcgrossgross-satire.612257

  • glupsx on Mar 24, 2009

    the most important virtues in people is the will. who holds there will be no end in this life or the next

  • jo oliver on Mar 24, 2009

    :)

  • Eunice Tan on Mar 24, 2009

    Creative work. Very cool.

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 25, 2009

    you’re absolutely right! in tagalog – “matalino man ang matsing, nalalamangan din” hehe

  • Alicia Wind on Mar 25, 2009

    Very cool…u should be proud! and nice way of putting it…

  • rutherfranc on Mar 26, 2009

    what an inspiring piece.. very encouraging.. and congratulations to both of you..

  • Ben donovan on Mar 28, 2009

    Congrats makes me wish I put forth a better effort in school, Boredom was my down fall. Got good grades first half and wasted the rest of the year in review.

  • Luffy12 on Mar 28, 2009

    true

  • Dee Gold on Apr 5, 2009

    congratulations to both of you

  • Felicitate on Apr 6, 2009

    Very nice. Motivation, inspiration and encouragement from you is what kept her going. Congratulations and keep it up!

  • bjr on Apr 11, 2009

    that wazzup

  • OhSugar on Apr 14, 2009

    Wow! You inspire me. Nice job.

  • Brewed Coffee on Feb 3, 2011

    Rummaged through your old posts….will use this inspiring piece for my next article sis! :-)

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