The story of the hare and the tortoise got it wrong. It would be the American that would have won the race and return to help the tortoises of the world.

The hare and tortoise

Are creatures with

Distinct personalities

- – -

The hare is fast 

With long hind legs

And is known for his 

Speed and ability to leap

- – -

The tortoise is a terrestrial

Turtle that is slow

And vulnerable

It however have a thick

Shell in which to retreat

When threatened 

- – -

As the story goes

The hare and the tortoise

Raced over a long distance

The hare like an American

Known for his speed and agility

In most things, built up

A considerable lead

Leaving the tortoise far behind 

- – -

The American so sure of himself 

Decided to take a nap

And as he napped the tortoise

Caught up and passed him

To win the race

- – -

I think that story 

Got it very wrong

An American hardly takes naps

He’s always on the move

Fast, agile, and creative

- – -

It would be the American

That would have won the race

Leaving the tortoise way behind

Afterwards, because of his altruism

He would have returned

To help the plodding turtle

Across the finish line

- – -

In a America

It is very true

That Charles Darwin’s fittest survive

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But there’s still some sense

That the tortoises of the world

Ought to be helped

There’s no time for napping

For such opportunities pass

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Comments (14)
  • Dreamy777 on Jul 20, 2011

    Awesome poem

  • Sebastian Onciu on Jul 20, 2011

    Great work!

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 20, 2011

    Another good one.

  • article on Jul 20, 2011

    nice sharing … good contarast .. i really liked it..:)))))

  • Lasaev on Jul 20, 2011

    nice sharing

  • juliachild on Jul 20, 2011

    ..Good share!..

  • PartizAnka on Jul 20, 2011

    interesting idea!

  • neopisiva on Jul 20, 2011

    Hmm,makes you think…
    Good work!

  • Audrey Howitt on Jul 20, 2011

    Well said!

  • Mary Thomas on Jul 21, 2011

    Interesting twist!

  • Eunice Tan on Jul 21, 2011

    Lovely story that will exist forever

  • Totton on Jul 21, 2011

    Awesome

  • Joe Ram on Jul 21, 2011

    interesting!

  • juliachild on Aug 7, 2011

    nice.

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