This is a poem I wrote in 5th grade. For some reason I still remember it. Enjoy, if you can.

I’m a little kid in Harlem

And I’m afraid to go outside

There’s gun shots everywhere

And there’s no place to hide.

My Daddy went outside one day

And got shot in the head.

I’ll never go outside again

I’ll stay inside instead.

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  • Shawn O on Oct 5, 2009

    Whoa. I don’t know what to say. I’m sorry about what happened to your Dad.

  • diamondpoet on Oct 13, 2009

    Wow how traumatic was that? Thank you for sharing that story inside a poem.

  • KristenKreashko on Oct 14, 2009

    This is a fictional poem. :)

  • K V Venkataramana on Dec 13, 2009

    A moving poem.

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