Poetry By Sourav RC.

Call of melody

fills the ambiance of earth

a Bird’s harmony. 

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  • ken bultman on Oct 3, 2009

    Hard to pick up on but I think it G-major, modulating to E.

  • Sourav on Oct 3, 2009

    I understand your difficulty… but sometimes Triond plays the game. Now it’s ok.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 3, 2009

    Very nice haiku.

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 3, 2009

    It’s poems like this one that make me appreciate the haiku.

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 3, 2009

    Ditto Guy’s comments; nice one

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 3, 2009

    So sweet & lovely*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 3, 2009

    lovely work. I love birds.

  • chitragopi on Oct 3, 2009

    Impressive haiku

  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 4, 2009

    A great Haiku poem..simple but so attractive, unique and lovely piece..I LOVED it!! Thanks for sharing:)

  • rizzei on Oct 4, 2009

    haiku though short seems to be more worth appreciating, nice one :)

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 4, 2009

    nice one ..very short..

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 4, 2009

    i shall return too

    as i now learn haiku true

    isn’t this ok

    its somewhat like a HAIKU

    5 7 5 as i am told

    by friend darla to do

    ah another haiku what???

  • CA Johnson on Oct 5, 2009

    I really liked your haiku. I thought you did a great job with it. I have trouble writing haikus, but you really made it look easy.

  • diamondpoet on Oct 6, 2009

    I like it, first online haiku I have read on line, I totally understand.

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