The saying "Hate is a very powerful word" is taken into poem. This is another random thought of mine so be easy on the grammar critics.

Hate is a Word…

Hate is a word we choose to use,

In many forms,

Even to amuse!

And quite frankly, hate is great!

Hate is a word used by those

Who’ve landed in disagreement with others.

And is often assumed by those

Who think the same.

Hate is a word so strong,

It can build walls and gates.

Hate has gone on for so long,

It doesn’t break.

Hate is a word used in anger or frustration,

That can lead to crime and mutilation.

Hate has shown its face many times,

And can usually be heard at least once before bed time.

Hate has driven people to tears,

Even prolonged one’s fears.

It can even force a poor soul to insanity,

Belittled and forgotten by his own family.

Hate is best demonstrated by politics and religion,

Crime and war.

Even in things that hate was not meant for.

And in the worse cases, blood and gore.

Hate is a word…

Yes, just a word.

A word so powerful,

that it can do so much harm

To one planet,

To one continent,

To one nation,

To one group,

To one family,

To one person…

Yes, Hate is a word…

–Mary Angela Guillen

Image via Wikipedia

12
Liked it
Comments (15)
  • Craigz on Nov 19, 2009

    Great poem

  • Hansika on Nov 19, 2009

    wonderful…

  • K.Reshma on Nov 19, 2009

    Excellent

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 19, 2009

    Isn’t it great that “hate” is just one of so many poweful words, some of which do great good.

  • TheStayAtHome on Nov 19, 2009

    i liked it..

    It carries very unique views that i didn’t every really think about till now.

    great read!

  • Aiyanna on Nov 19, 2009

    Mary, I liked this poem of yours the best!!!! :)

  • lucia anna on Nov 20, 2009

    I like this poem, too!

  • Steven West on Nov 22, 2009

    Very well stated. I can’t say that I hated this poem.

  • raptor22 on Nov 23, 2009

    Good one.

  • Shekinah Shazaam on Nov 23, 2009

    I likie! ;D

  • V rank on Nov 27, 2009

    i was not aware that hate is amusing… but i just realized that it is indeed… thanks…

  • Night Story on Nov 29, 2009

    Interesting.

  • XXElleXX on Dec 3, 2009

    I loathe the word ‘hate’ ~ Hate is too great a burden to bear. It injures the hater more than it injures the hated. No grammar issues here LovelyWolf :-)

  • diamondpoet on Dec 3, 2009

    Hate is a strong and very intense word, thanks you for writing this, good piece.

  • Darien15 on Dec 10, 2009

    awesome poem.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading