Haters

Dena McCusker on Sep 28, 2009

A poem.

You’re all just haters,

Welcome to the ball

Strap on those heels

And try not to fall

Yeah that’s right men,

It goes for you too

With your bitching and whining,

Those heels are for you

Onlywaytobesure, you’re a absolute mess.

Write your own work,

And leave others to rest

Who ever said you were the best?

Surely not I, maybe one will agree

Publish more stuff and maybe we’ll see

8
Liked it

Comments (8)

cardy on Sep 28, 2009
This is a new turn for you a good write felt you pounding at the keys with this one.
chantell on Sep 28, 2009
Wow, Thanks for sharing.
Shawn O on Sep 28, 2009
Tell’em, Dena. Great flow as always.
Will Dee on Sep 28, 2009
Interesting poem. I feel the FIRE!
Atanacio on Sep 29, 2009
damn, I come to read your work I enjoy so much and you knock me over and try to put heels on me– well baby homey don’t play that– LOL only kidding I can feel your frustration in this write– but Bless you
giftarist on Sep 29, 2009
That was great..I like it!
foxmcou0d on Oct 3, 2009
that was good i enjoyed reading it =D
livemike on Oct 11, 2009
Great poem and well said..

Hi there!