Yet another song, any critique is welcome as always, enjoy.

Hatred and doubt,
I can live without,
Love and care,
Can be too much to bear,
Happy and sad,
Enough to dive one mad

The moment our eyes first met,
To myself, I made an important bet,
That I could care for you, cherish you,
And forever be the only one who,
Would show my truest love to,
Call it worthless, call it obsession,
I call it love, I call it passion

Hatred and doubt,
I can live without,
Love and care,
Can be too much to bear,
Happy and sad,
Enough to dive one mad

All of a sudden, about a week back,
Our heart as one, began to crack,
We started fighting, we starting hating,
It was the total opposite to when we were dating,
Our love was beginning to die,
To fall this low, I had to be highest of the high,
With you, my goddess of the sky

Hatred and doubt,
I can live without,
Love and care,
Can be too much to bear,
Happy and sad,
Enough to dive one mad

Please don’t make this hard on me,
I’ve done everything to cherish thee,
If you want me to change just say it,
Don’t make me guess wrong and tell me I know s**t,
Cause I still love you,
And I’m clueless what to do,
We both know it’s going down the drain,
And we both know we cannot continue living in this pain!

Hatred and doubt,
I can live without,
Love and care,
Can be too much to bear,
Happy and sad,
Enough to dive one mad

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  • Yovita Siswati on Jan 9, 2011

    I like the playful words. Keep up the good work.

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