Haunted Visions

ShadowPsychos on May 20, 2010

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Molecules debating

raining down from a blasted sun

the only survivor here

shadowed in the storm

the light is not my friend

i just hold my breath

and walk on through each night

digging thumbs into my eyes

recurring insistence that i am still alive

do not evacuate my time

here i’ll stay with my blisters

watching you all leave

from the crack in my door

with the holes in the walls

flying through acres of debris

in a washed out soul

with the thorns piercing my lungs

detection of unamended attention

resting in solitude

silence cackling in the heat

of burnt out wavering mannequins

talking of dying visions

draped in haunted light

and cold desert thunders

finding comfort in the fact

had i not been deserted

i would have still died

all alone inside

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Comments (11)

Netty net on May 20, 2010
I like how your poem starts out raining down from a blazing sun., I guess this could be a ghostly poem.
drelayaraja on May 20, 2010
Nicely penned…
drelayaraja on May 20, 2010
Nicely penned…
Judi Eddy on May 20, 2010
Good one. have you heard of allpoetry? it is another site I am on. I can give you the link if you wnt. judi
Ranjan Mathews on May 20, 2010
Virus ghost invasions
From seance sessions.
Atanacio on May 20, 2010
the title alone made me know I was going to like this write
Lady Fantasy on May 20, 2010
Great piece that was written and well worth reading.But then again,the tittle got my attention from the beginning.Well written and liked this alot.
silentbob14 on May 20, 2010
Liked this one. It has a special atmosphere
ageeinc on May 20, 2010
Wild Poem. i liked it, good work.
neha80 on May 20, 2010
Interesting Piece.

Today I know more about it. Good subject selection for writing and sharing with others.

Thanks for sharing good one.

Anjal….!!!
Jimmy Shilaho on May 21, 2010
I must say you have mastered the art of dark writing.

Hi there!