A joyful wish for all of the whole…

Please have a nice day.
 I hope all will go right.
and please find a way
to walk in the light.

Bright Fractal I; art, digital art, fractal art, photography

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The world is so vast
and the whole of we parts.
Together we’ll last
cause we’re sharing one heart.
I wish the world joy
from the depths of my soul.
Whether a girl or a boy,
we’re all part of the whole.
So nurture the love
and say goodbye to the hate.
Then, wherever you rove
love will open the gate.
So, I’ll have a great day
it finally went right.
I gotta great life
after all of the strife…..

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  • Melissa Cook on Dec 22, 2008

    That was a good write thanks for sharing!

  • Unofre Pili on Dec 22, 2008

    I wish this wish would come true for all of us. Great poetic composition.

  • Bo Russo on Dec 22, 2008

    Really like this one Bren,the picture is great too.

  • Marli Diz on Dec 23, 2008

    NIce. You don’t need not to change but, the word rove…
    well, hate rhymes w/ gate…
    I say…that you’ll shall put “Roam”.

    just helpin’ out…

  • eddiego65 on Dec 25, 2008

    Wonderful piece. I wish you the same too.

  • hfj on Dec 31, 2008

    Beautiful poem, and the picture fit the poem like a glove. Thanks for the inspiration. Well done.

  • shaky on Jan 2, 2009

    cool

  • rutherfranc on Jan 3, 2009

    very inspirational…the poem rhymed with the picture

  • Jenny Heart on Jan 8, 2009

    I’m speechless! It’s was inspiring. The picture was a topper to your great writing. God bless you!

  • Darren Goad on Jan 8, 2009

    Very well written and inspiring too.

  • Sharona on Jan 10, 2009

    Beautiful, and the picture is lovely. Makes me feel as if I am there.

  • Noreen Ann Jenkins on Jan 12, 2009

    A beautiful, well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. The photo is beautiful, too. Thanks for sharing.

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