Have I Lost Myself?

lene21 on Aug 11, 2009

Tags: Confusion, Empty, lost, myself, poem, poems, Poetry, sadness, Thoughts, traitors, waiting, waits, wondering

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Emotions grinding confusion,
washing and bringing sadness to fill to empty places.
Racing thoughts that make no sense.
Fruitless labor and burst of excitement, shredded by traitors.
Waiting for something I’ve lost.
And wondering during all this waiting,
Have I truly lost myself?

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Peter Cimino on Aug 11, 2009
That’s the one thing we all cannot afford to do…lose ourselves. Well done.
Jeremy James Noye on Aug 11, 2009
Fantastic poem. Having just ended a long relationship this seems to speak right to me.
George W Whitehead on Aug 11, 2009
Great poem, Lene.
V rank on Dec 30, 2009
maybe, you have lost yourself… but for good… if not, you would not be able to come up with this crazy little piece of art…! I like it’s simplicity…
claire on May 19, 2011
Nice poem.

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