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Have You Ceased to Love Me?

Darla Cooke on Oct 24, 2009
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A poem about heartbreak.

 

I waited for you letter,

it never arrived in the mail.

You don’t call on the telephone,

perhaps you have forgotten me.

Have my fears become reality?

Has your desire for me weakened?

You seldom come to visit me,

I can feel my heart breaking.

Have you ceased to love me?

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  • larry84 on Oct 24, 2009

    Deep and thoughtful!

  • alc on Oct 24, 2009

    Touching! Enjoyable though!

  • ceegirl on Oct 24, 2009

    Sweet poem

  • cardy on Oct 24, 2009

    A sweet write form you!

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Oct 24, 2009

    a lot of emotion in very few words! love it!

  • rizzei on Oct 24, 2009

    emotional..yes..but still lovely..i felt it..well done! :)

  • lillyrose on Oct 24, 2009

    very sad poem!

  • chitragopi on Oct 24, 2009

    Intensely emotional in simple words.

  • Judi Eddy on Oct 24, 2009

    Very nice wording.x

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 24, 2009

    Very sad one…

  • johnnydod on Oct 24, 2009

    Sorry baby I was busy :0)

  • Olivia Van Logum on Oct 24, 2009

    I love you Darla!

    Really sad poem…

  • ken bultman on Oct 24, 2009

    Stuff happens.

  • deep blue on Oct 24, 2009

    Sad things make us strong. Nice poem.

  • Petalm on Oct 24, 2009

    Great writing.

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 24, 2009

    Lovely work Darla!I loved the title of this poem and subject.Good stuff!

  • Albert van der Steeg on Oct 24, 2009

    Very touching poem

  • deliah jones on Oct 24, 2009

    An emotional poem

  • RayFree on Oct 24, 2009

    I love heartbreak poems and this one to

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 24, 2009

    lonely and blue,

  • petercurtis97 on Oct 25, 2009

    It is sad indeed.But I really need to tell you it’s time to move on.

  • writing4angels on Oct 25, 2009

    Oh! Yesterday I was about to write a poem on the same issue but I think I cannot justify it more than you have done here.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 25, 2009

    maybe he’s just too busy. sad poem.

  • giftarist on Oct 25, 2009

    Heartfelt..Poignant.. a nice piece!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 26, 2009

    no way

    you are my firstest fan

    i shall send you a post

    rightaway

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 16, 2009

    Very deeply emotional and written with great imagery.

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