Great depth!

really loved this… i always wanted a willow tree to read under… if i ever do get one.. i will now feel like a m reading to and w/all the children..

Thanks for sharing

I was blown away by this poem!
It’s so deep and powerful, and about an issue close to my heart!
Bravo!

I was blown away by this poem!
It\’s so deep and powerful, and about an issue close to my heart!
Bravo!

Great peom. I enjoyed it.

Lovely poem.

powerful poem, interesting too.

Brilliant Work

So sentimental, I love it!

That is such a beautiful and poignant piece.

Christine

lovely poem.love it!

Something very new.

This poem made me sad. I don’t know why people are so cruel.
Anyway, very well-writen and easy to understand poem that brings up things that most people are trying to ignore or forget.

Thank you for sharing this, the most powerful poem by you I have read, it made the tears flow. How we long for the New World when the tears of sadness will be gone and all children are welcome and happy.

actually this was pretty good well done

Thanks everyone for reading and commenting on my poem!

expressed the message very beautifully

your such a talented fella..great poem!

s j tubrazy and melphens, thanks for your comments.

wonderful work my friend..you did great job..

Thanks mkd1788!

I guess someone has got to do the mourning. Very nice piece.

nice piece! =p

Interesting. I have never gotten so emotional about a tree.

thanks for sharing this

Great share, thanks.

this poem touched my heart! very good work!

Nice relation, but what made you think that the willows weep because of child issues? There are so many global issue. Why did you relate the willow’s sadness to child abuse? just asking..

Thanks everyone!

Alexanderlegend, I think the saddest thing is when innocent children suffer. So many are killed even before they have a chance to breathe fresh air. They are so full of wonder, life and laughter. They should be loved and cuddled and made to feel safe. What kind people are those that hurt them? What kind of people are those that kill them? Do those kind of people even deserve to live?

Great and interested job. Well done.

Thanks Max!

this so deep hope! i hope many more can read this poem! good job my friend!

I read it………… (crying)

I read it… (crying)

beautiful words that symbolise the weeping willow tree. you are absolutely right. its branches are always drooping downwards as if it is carrying a huge weight on its shoulders and this poem expresses the pain and torment in our world. i love it all. thanks very much for sharing.

Thanks for all your beautiful words!

A very touching poem my friend, well done.