And, hearts smile at the horizon.

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And he plays the music in my heart
And, he sings, an angel’s song
And, he leaves strings of love
Even when he’s gone

I still feel his presence, feel the warmth
Of his embrace

The miles, are not so distant
His absence cannot fade

For, like the setting of the sun
And stars that smile at the horizon
We are building a future together
For, he is the one.

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  • Mys Lyke Meeh on Jan 2, 2009

    Wow–Lianne,

    Soothing and very sure feelings…

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 2, 2009

    Beautiful words, lovely sentiments.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 2, 2009

    I agree with Glynis. Beautiful words. I’m so pleased he’s the one.

    Christine

  • Colleen Ranney on Jan 2, 2009

    Love this one! I just got married and I feel these things about my new Husband He is the one!

  • hfj on Jan 2, 2009

    i think you found the one. good luck and happy relationship.

  • Morgana on Jan 2, 2009

    Beautiful, sounds loving and joyful.

  • Reilley on Jan 2, 2009

    Awesome piece, very romantic!

  • payge on Jan 2, 2009

    a very romantic piece..i liked it and agree with left comments.

  • papaleng on Jan 2, 2009

    Indeed you have found the right man.. I like the passionate words used in this great poem.

  • Peter Cimino on Jan 2, 2009

    Very romantic and heartfelt poem…wonderfully done as always!

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 2, 2009

    I love the picture chosen with the thoughts, and that you used two things that have great impact in peoples lives: The creation around us and music. Also, profound love which not even distance cannot separate joined with absolute confidence in the relatonship and pointing to the future. Really great!

  • Mercedes Selvira on Jan 2, 2009

    Lovely as always, Liane. I really like the tone here–so uplifting :)

  • MJPatrick on Jan 2, 2009

    That is fantastic!

  • Jeoffrey Meister on Jan 2, 2009

    Beautiful poem, Liane; very romantic and warm.

  • Bo Jack Russo on Jan 2, 2009

    Very very nice,and am happy for you too.

  • Kim Buck on Jan 2, 2009

    Very romantic and beautifully said.

  • Will Gray on Jan 2, 2009

    So very romantic and stunning emotion!

  • Poetic Enigma on Jan 2, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem,
    so romantic and sweet.
    Almost brought tears to my eyes,
    because I feel something like this
    with the one I love
    Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem :)

  • jewelsofmine on Jan 2, 2009

    Makes my heart sing! Great job!

  • Carolyn Ann Aish on Jan 2, 2009

    This reminds me of my love of almost 40 years – he played the music in my heart and I do feel his love even though he’s been gone for over 5 years – and your words are right for me – “I still feel his presence, feel the warmth of his embrace” – thank you for this beautiful poem and I do indeed hope you build a future with your love.

  • trishia on Jan 2, 2009

    Simply beautiful!

  • Moses Ingram on Jan 2, 2009

    Beautiful words.

  • Abdul Sabour Ayoubi on Jan 2, 2009

    A very nice poem with excellent writing.

  • Westbrook on Jan 2, 2009

    I am happy for you Liane

  • CA Johnson on Jan 2, 2009

    This is another great poem. :)

  • Bren Parks on Jan 2, 2009

    You have a real gift.

  • Catelin Hoover on Jan 2, 2009

    Liane
    This is so wonderful I am going to send it around a bit!
    God Bless Catelin

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 2, 2009

    Your poems always get me impressed! Take care!

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 2, 2009

    A lovely work.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 2, 2009

    Your poem is so warm with feeling.It’s the story of love. We can all identify.

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 2, 2009

    A romantic piece under the star.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 2, 2009

    lovely and romantic as ever,

  • william rodriguez II on Jan 3, 2009

    Very sweet poem,I like it.Thanks!

  • mimis on Jan 3, 2009

    :-)

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 3, 2009

    That’s lovely,

    Inna

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Jan 3, 2009

    Lucky man

  • TommyP on Jan 3, 2009

    We need an I LOVED IT never mind “liked it” button to click on!! Thanks for sharing this one!! Would that I were this “musician”!

  • NA Staffieri on Jan 3, 2009

    I love your poems, Liane. Thank you.

  • S M Blomker on Jan 3, 2009

    beautiful……I like it….just added a new one myself.

  • Benjamin Bright on Jan 3, 2009

    I suppose it’s a little redundant at this point…but I like it too.

  • david irvine on Jan 3, 2009

    very good

  • Angie0000023 on Jan 3, 2009

    THis is very good. Nice job!!

    check out my stuff?

  • rutherfranc on Jan 3, 2009

    do you have a dictionary? they’ve all used the words I like to describe your piece…

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Jan 3, 2009

    wonder who he is…

  • purple raine on Jan 3, 2009

    your piece of work was truly touching. it leaves you speechless, with a thought in my head, and touches a place in my heart.

  • Rajesh on Jan 3, 2009

    Excellent Poetry

  • Debra. on Jan 4, 2009

    Soft, sweet, pure, light and straight from the heart. That’s what makes it special.

    God bless to you, Liane.

  • eddiego65 on Jan 4, 2009

    You always write the most romantic stuff. You share your emotion so effectively through the words you use. Another superb poem.

  • sarahe1981 on Jan 5, 2009

    Wow! That is beautiful! I love the write!

  • AstralMelody on Jan 5, 2009

    Yes, well there is nothing that I can say that hasn’t already been said. You do have a real talent girl. You write with both your head and heart. You have both passion and drive and shows in your work. I really like your writting.

  • Anabel Cassar on Jan 6, 2009

    really romantic! your words portray true love!

  • TOPELECTRICIAN on Jan 6, 2009

    I liked that very much. of couse i can never write like that. i,m stuck on a certain type of poetry but with you i,m learning, thank-you……

  • lindalulu on Jan 9, 2009

    Very nice,romantic and full of feeling.

  • 1Mind on Jan 11, 2009

    This is really a beautiful piece. I am really glad to see an expression of confidence in a relationship. So many people seem to fixated on broken relationships these days…

  • Ranveer Singh Battu on Jan 15, 2009

    excellent expression!!!!

  • Maria Blazz on Jan 21, 2009

    Good description for a very special state of the soul!

  • coker on Feb 26, 2009

    very well done…does he play an instrument? i hope that i am thought about like that one day…*S*

  • Blessing Boston on Apr 23, 2009

    I have never been able to express the feelings and emotions that I have experienced with the Lord Jesus, but I must say, You sound like you know Him….and have a personal fellowship with Him.!!!! He once told me that He was sending to me, someone, a husband, that would be like Him, to love me.!!!Yeah!! Thank you, for bringing that experience back to life, to me, so I can receive it by faith. God Bless you greatly and abundantly!!!!

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