A surprise proposal.

She smells the rose

At the tip of her nose

As soon as she saw the rose

This made her feelings grow

All of her blood rushed to her head

He is always on her mind

They make love all over the bed

That is how they love to spend their time

Her hands all over his chest

They love so deep they don’t get enough rest

At dinner he gets down on one knee

Her hands over her mouth “Oh my gosh it’s going to be me!”

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  • LOVELY HONEY on Nov 30, 2009

    lovely its tasty gr888888888

  • BeyondPretty22 on Nov 30, 2009

    Oh I like

  • ceegirl on Nov 30, 2009

    That was so sweet.

  • jimbob1 on Nov 30, 2009

    A very romantic proposal…down on one knee yet!!! Great stuff.

  • drelayaraja on Jan 2, 2010

    Romantic :)

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