He seemed nice.

He seemed nice,

guessing that is like getting a seven on a dice.

You don’t really know,

if you don’t know the guy,

don’t go.

Ladies,

don’t be stupid,

a guy looking for a one night stand

is not what I would call a gift from cupid.

I know a girl who got raped,

her mouth covered with tape.

She got taken into the house,

he tore off her blouse.

She was only fifteen,

just a little teen.

He hurt her really bad,

he left an emotional scar,

her look on guys is now bad,

she wont even get in the car,

with any guy,

let alone a “nice guy” from the  bar.

So,

know that for them to just to look ok,

when he gets creepy,

don’t stay.

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  • Ask Cash on Jun 4, 2009

    I truly hope that is not a true incident. How horrible.

  • Ask Cash on Jun 4, 2009

    I truly hope that is not a true incident. How horrible.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 4, 2009

    Once bitten twice shy.It is quite hard to get such things digested.

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 4, 2009

    Good piece, sad subject.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Jun 4, 2009

    A sad commentary on a crime that should be abolished. Good poem.

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