Sometimes something can get too much and causes your head to spin.

Head-
In such a spin.
Could compete with a whirlwind, said;
Like a thousand twirls has participated in.
Such a numb feeling,
Causing sickness and
Cramp. As though the ceiling
Has crumbled before me.  The stand
Is raised,
But cannot opt for this conclusion.
>
Hours upon hours of lost sleep, grazed
Every expectation,
That the dizziness would stop.
But as it is fired from the gun,
A bullet will hit and pierce all emotion. Will
Mop up any innocence.  Gee how fun!

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  • agriculi on Aug 30, 2009

    Is it a migrain or did you have too much to drink last night?

  • alc on Aug 30, 2009

    Like the write kinda makes you think!

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