Sometimes a situation you get yourself into causes your head to spin!

Head-
In such a spin.
Could compete with a whirlwind, said;
Like a thousand twirls has participated in.
Such a numb feeling,
Causing sickness and
Cramp. As though the ceiling
Has crumbled before me. The stand
Is raised,
But cannot opt for this conclusion.
>
Hours upon hours of lost sleep, grazed
Every expectation,
That the dizziness would stop.
But as it is fired from the gun,
A bullet will hit and pierce all emotion. Will
Mop up any innocence. Gee how fun!

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Comments (4)
  • raman13 on Aug 30, 2009

    Good and interesting stuff

    Marvelous

    Best Regards

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 30, 2009

    well done good read only the head spin don\’t sound like much fun to me :)

  • lindalulu on Aug 30, 2009

    Nice post…

  • Emma Green on Aug 31, 2009

    No, no fun at all!!! Was a little sarcasm in there!

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