The speaker is undergoing hard time with his beloved. he feels dejected and deluded towards love and life.

Night wind is blowing gently,

It is drizzling outside.

The drop of water is dripping from my drenched hair.

In the cold rain I shed silent tears

Remembering the day we first met each other.

I am wondering why my love is nothing to you.

I guess my love isn’t due to the edge of your life.

Night is crying silently,

The wind is screaming with fear,

To hide my unending tears

It’s raining with scattering sound in my heart,

Too all around where world seems to be reversed aside.

Wind and rain still cry

It’s still burning heavily inside my agonized heart.

 

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Comments (15)
  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 26, 2011

    I sense the sadness.

  • samgoldencoffee on Jul 26, 2011

    very beautiful words…
    truly touching.

  • Wherner5 on Jul 26, 2011

    interesting

  • chandrra on Jul 26, 2011

    So sad.. Time will change. keep hoping for that. chill.

  • dixie1965 on Jul 26, 2011

    i really liked this… good work

  • Dreamy777 on Jul 26, 2011

    awesome poem

  • richardpeeej on Jul 26, 2011

    Lovely words my friend, so heartfelt and sad…Thanks for sharing your thoughts…..

  • article on Jul 26, 2011

    very touching poem …nice sharing

  • mona rastogi on Jul 26, 2011

    very nice

  • sambasivarao on Jul 26, 2011

    Very interesting

  • Redfiery on Jul 27, 2011

    AAah powerful atonement ! Very very heartfelt Yeasin

  • rappeter13 on Jul 27, 2011

    Enjoyed this poem.

  • mehwish111 on Jul 28, 2011

    good

  • aroosamorose on Jul 28, 2011

    Very emotional and dejected poetry.Keep up a good work.

  • yeasin on Jul 28, 2011

    thanks all

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