Love is something and it has its good and bad points.But for the most part its worth everything we put into it.Sometimes actions speak louder then our spoken words will ever do.I suppose this is my version of one way it could do just that.

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You softly asked me how much I loved you,

but I was lost in your slow sensual touch.

You asked me once, twice and even thrice,

it was on the last time I finally heard you.

****

I took my sweet time giving you an answer,

for there was no words to really describe it.

A sensual smile was the best possible answer,

for it was much easier to just demonstrate it.

****

With a smile I unbound my long dark tresses,

their  heavy length reached to my supple hips.

With a shake of my head they quickly tumbled,

begging to have your big hands ran through it.

****

Within minutes your hands touched my body,

my twin mountains easily filling up your hands.

Perfect is softly heard and he really meant it,

bolts of erotic electricity went through my body.

****

I bent down to give him a passionate kiss,

causing a fire that consumed the both of us.

His hands easily tangled in my long dark hair,

no words were needed to say come closer.

****

Side by side we lay on the messed up bed,

our eyes taking in the others exquisite body.

In a matter of minutes another fire started,

my warm hands roamed my lovers muscular body.

*****

Oral pleasure were willingly given that night,

if the walls could talk they would tell our story.

Cries of pure pleasure was heard all that night,

the outside world simply doesn’t exist to them.

*****

When she finally satisfied him as he asked of her,

they came together as one with an erotic purpose.

Wave after wave of pleasure matched the thunder,

mother nature providing the perfect atmosphere.

****

But finally the satisfied pair came back  to earth,

their heavy breathing was proof of their activity.

He reached over and softly said I really loved this,

it was saying everything that you couldn’t earlier.

****

She kissed him back with a passionate kiss as well,

he did not need no words to know she loved him.

Her actions said everything plus some that night,

mother nature smiled and quietly slipped away then.

*****

They settled in the warm covers to finally sleep,

both knowing that the other was fully satisfied.

A soft I love you was whispered in the am hours,

she whispered I love you to and have sweet dreams.

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Comments (6)
  • King Coil on Dec 8, 2010

    This is a beautifully written romantic piece. I felt the energy
    from each line which is a very important component.

  • clandestinef on Dec 8, 2010

    Great work. Interesting to read. Cheers!!!

  • dino renaldo on Dec 8, 2010

    nice share..thanks

  • PSingh1990 on Dec 8, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • STEVE666 on Dec 8, 2010

    A steamy piece, Roxanne.
    Well written.

  • S A JOHNSON on Dec 13, 2010

    I agree with Steve. Very steamy and sensual. ^_^

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