Short story.

Slam. tap tap. flop.

Snif snif

knock. knock. “you have to let this go. Please. I beg you. Ashley? ASHLEY!”

Snif. Sob.

click. Rattle rattle. “Open the door…OPEN.The.door!”

Click. Click. Click. Crack! Thud!

“Ashley listen to me baby. It isn’t true. She’s lying.  Baby. Believe me.” Tap tap tap.

Sniff. “GO AWAY, BEN”

“Ash… Please…”

“GO AWAY”

“I didnt sleep with her baby… listen to me..”

“GO. AWAY.”

Whish. “Ben Don’t touch me. GO. AWAAEYY!”

“Ashey..”

Slap! silence.

Sniff Sniff. Sob.

Tap Tap Tap. Thud!

Sniff Sniff SOB!

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  • Pаtsy Collins on Oct 20, 2009

    Very good.

    I see we have something in common – a fondness for saying as much as we can with the minimum of words.

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