About my love, About Shee…

Hearts are Exchanged

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

She feels too happy

If She is my side,

In our day dreams

We go for a ride…

……… ………….. ……….. 

She hides her face

When she is shy,

Our hearts are exchanged

When its time for a bye…

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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  • Sunitha Stalin on Dec 16, 2009

    Loved te pictures and well written

  • johnnydod on Dec 16, 2009

    so in love you are

  • Lord Banks on Dec 16, 2009

    I liked that very nice fantasy picture too aah!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 16, 2009

    A very sweet and well written piece. The picture at the beginning is so beautiful.

    Christine

  • mkd1788 on Dec 16, 2009

    cute feelings…cutely expressed..

  • Dame Barbara on Dec 16, 2009

    Very touching!

  • Teves on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice one…

  • bailieman on Dec 16, 2009

    Heartfelt, I liked it.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 16, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 16, 2009

    Sweetly simple and profound. I’ll carry her love with me where ever she goes.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 16, 2009

    Your work is awe inspiring, outstanding pics. You really made this piece come to life.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Dec 16, 2009

    nice composition

  • Hansika on Dec 16, 2009

    very nice…

  • Starpisces on Dec 16, 2009

    nice poem, rhymes so well, well expressed, and also the picture is very nice, perfect!

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 16, 2009

    A nice, romantic poem that makes me feel young again.

  • magicdarts on Dec 16, 2009

    lovely evocative piece, like the pictures!

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009

    Such a beautiful, romantic piece.

  • Videomark on Dec 16, 2009

    A nice blending of pictures.

  • lillyrose on Dec 16, 2009

    beautiful and mellow!

  • richardpeeej on Dec 16, 2009

    nicely expressed

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 16, 2009

    beautifully expressed and such lovely pictures

  • fmakeita on Dec 16, 2009

    I love the pics and poem. Beautiful. Two thumbs up dude ;)

  • AlmaG on Dec 16, 2009

    That’s a cute poem :)

  • PR Mace on Dec 16, 2009

    Touching piece.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 16, 2009

    Romantic and sweet,

  • drelayaraja on Dec 16, 2009

    Thats a overwhelming response to my poems.. When it comes from the heart, its is always touching and best :)

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 16, 2009

    So sweet … and romantic

  • gaby7 on Dec 24, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • Susan The Poet on Jan 3, 2010

    Love the beautiful picture.

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