“Heat”

Dame Barbara on Dec 13, 2009

A strong desire that must be quenched, and then it is, leaving a satisfied heap.

Silence, I softly speak

quietening my mind of thought,

hoping to reach a certain peak.

A whisper can be heard with every beat.

I can feel the heat

spread across my face

and down my body,

with a blushing embrace.

The heat extends to unseen places,

and all the secret spaces.

the temperature rises

and the beating gets faster,

with urges I must master.

My thoughts become erratic,

as do body and soul,

becoming more intense

with each maneuver and tactic,

and one common goal.

Seizing the urge intensifies the need

in keeping with a fast rate,

until the tension is released wave after wave

unleashing a dammed up lake.

The urges are now mastered,

and I fall into a deep restful sleep,

on my bed in a satisfied heap.

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T. S. Lewis on Dec 13, 2009
Ooo wee! Loved it
Stan Wilson on Dec 13, 2009
beautifully written,and the sequence of each intense moment is captured into the readers minds eyes and soul,so as they now become participants,and enjoy the ride to satisfying conclusion..very very good poem….thank you
jimbob1 on Dec 13, 2009
DB…this is a very enjoyable, erotic read…probably a fun one to write. I must apologize, because I seem like I\’m running out of appropriate, descriptive complimentary adjective to describe your material…as Tony the Tiger on the box of cereal would say…This is g-g-g-r-r-r-e-a-t – Looking forward to reading more of your incredible writing.
jimbob1 on Dec 13, 2009
DB…this is a very enjoyable, erotic read…probably a fun one to write. I must apologize, because I seem like I am running out of appropriate, descriptive complimentary adjective to describe your material…as Tony the Tiger on the box of cereal would say…This is g-g-g-r-r-r-e-a-t – Looking forward to reading more of your incredible writing.
jimbob1 on Dec 13, 2009
DB…this is a very enjoyable, erotic read…probably a fun one to write. I must apologize, because I seem like I am running out of appropriate, descriptive complimentary adjectives to describe your material…as Tony the Tiger on the box of cereal would say…This is g-g-g-r-r-r-e-a-t – Looking forward to reading more of your incredible writing.

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