Asking God if I am still needed after I die.

After the days collect themselves
And time stands at the water’s edge
After the sun stops revolving
And stars melt the midnight sky

Will You need me?

After the river of words runs dry
And the forest burns green leaves
After the winds die
And the clouds cry freedom

Will You need me?

After the hummingbird knocks
At my garden door
After the Maples reach out
There autumn hands

Will You need me?

After the oceans toast their glasses
Against the jagged rock
After the deserted island
Is no longer alone

Will You need me?

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  • M.C. Johnson on Oct 7, 2007

    This is lovely! Absolutely deliciously wonderful. And every one of those adjectives is heart felt!

  • Liane Schmidt on Oct 31, 2007

    What an interesting poem. Beautiful and thought provoking. Leaves much food for thought.

    “After the oceans toast their glasses”

    Loved that line.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Nick Kenney on Nov 10, 2007

    I totally agree with Liane, “After the oceans toast their glasses”…love it!
    BRAVO!

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