When I get to heaven life will be much easier and no one will care what I look like.

In heaven there will be,

dancing and singing.

I won’t have to apply any make-up,

because I am not going to heaven,

to put on a show.

Heaven is not complex.

If I don’t use the proper annunciation.

God won’t be upset.

Heaven is very real.

God will make provisions for me,

 24-7 I’ll be served  a hot meal.

When the rapture takes place,

I don’t want to be left behind.

I want to going with my father.

to a place that is so divine.

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  • Darla Cooke on Dec 23, 2009

    Beautifully written!

  • ken bultman on Dec 23, 2009

    How beautiful Heaven must be.

  • tonywriter on Dec 23, 2009

    a beautiful fantasy poem,Thank you!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 23, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem, however lately your articles have a dark undertone, which I take liberty to chalk up as depression. I hope that I’m wrong but if you are depressed…..Work it out…this is the season to be jolly. Fa la la …la la la la la la la. :)

  • fmakeita on Dec 23, 2009

    beautiful :)

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 23, 2009

    Lovely thoughts and beautiful pictures.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 23, 2009

    Terry what are you talking about, I not aware of the undertone.

  • CA Johnson on Dec 23, 2009

    This is great. This is a lovely thought about heaven.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice work!

  • Shekinah Shazaam on Dec 24, 2009

    Heaven will happen soon won’t it? =]

  • Michael Eboh on Dec 24, 2009

    I agree wit you and hope so. Really, Heaven is real and doesn’t Care. Thanks for your lovely share.

  • xoxo on Dec 25, 2009

    Heaven is a good place… No more suffering, no more heart aches… All can be equal. Good poem.

  • ladydryle on Dec 26, 2009

    what a nice poem…heaven is what everyone dreams…nice poem together with the image attached in here sooo lovely…:)

  • Starpisces on Dec 26, 2009

    Nice one, I enjoy reading this poem!
    :)

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Feb 3, 2010

    In your creativity you express the deepest yearning of humanity for a safe place filled with comfort.

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