How is Hell described by me?

This is Hell

Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as an avenging sword falls against my heart.
It slays me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In agony I dance
while oblivion approaches.
Now alone, my fervent plea falls upon howling eyes.

This is Hell!!

Around, all around, the sinister creatures gather.
My dread grows as a reaper’s sword falls against my neck.
It smites me, and darkly my
life’s blood drips
to the dead grass.
In horror I fall limply
while Death’s shadow laughs cruelly.
Now alone, my love falls upon bloody eyes.

This is MY HELL!!

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  • erwinkennythomas on Jul 24, 2011

    horrible images! v. nice share!

  • LCM Linda on Jul 24, 2011

    Thanks for sharing with us what your Hell looks like.

  • MOhsinSayeed on Jul 25, 2011

    This is just an imagination.
    By the Way, I’m Going to Heaven.

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 25, 2011

    You created “sinister” well. I like how it reads… good rhythm.

    Thanks for your comment on mine on anxious parents – schools really do need to do more about bullying. I think that is a tough one for all parents – when the schools don’t take sensible action.

  • vietnam on Jul 26, 2011

    be not afraid HELL AND HEAVEN R MAN MADE
    M Y T H S

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