Meeting her there, at that time of the day, was perfect.

The rocky bridge spanned over the widest part of the river
Allowing the torrid waters to eagerly flow along with a true force
While afternoon sun smiled through the overhead covering branches
I had made my way upon the bridge to meet her and take her in my arms

There she was, as promised, she’d be waiting, wearing that blouse
I had given her for the pleasure of giving her, the color was perfect for her
She smiled upon me and suddenly the sunlight was lost, as her light shone stronger
I got close enough to smell the perfume that incites desires, reaching her, we kissed hello

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Comments (5)
  • Will Gray on Oct 21, 2008

    So romantic and wonderful!

  • goodselfme on Oct 21, 2008

    Very well penned!

  • Darla Smith on Oct 21, 2008

    This is a beautiful poem, Michael.

  • Eric Mendoza on Oct 21, 2008

    Very descriptive. Its like I can play it as a movie reel in my head.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Oct 21, 2008

    I agree with Eric, I was imagining the movie a River Runs through it or the notebook.

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