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Her Blue Eyes Over My Teary-eyed

jaysonv on Dec 12, 2009
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A short poem about feelings of love in spite of loneliness. "I feel the LOVE through her eyes."

“I feel the LOVE through her eyes.”

Her eyes are so blue,

As blue as the sky above.

Shimmering so bright as a sun,

Scintillating my teary eyes.

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  • ceegirl on Dec 12, 2009

    Blue is my favorite color. Beautiful eyes.

  • jaysonv on Dec 12, 2009

    Thanks..

  • Judy Kaelin on Dec 12, 2009

    Very nice

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 12, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 12, 2009

    Lovely*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 12, 2009

    Good work!

  • johnnydod on Dec 12, 2009

    Great little poem

  • Liz Sapphire on Dec 12, 2009

    Lovely poem, beautiful eyes. Blue is also my favorite color. =)

  • LovelyWolf on Dec 12, 2009

    This is lovely, thank you!

  • LovelyWolf on Dec 12, 2009

    This is very lovely, thank you!

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 13, 2009

    This is so beautiful. Excellent.

  • jaysonv on Dec 13, 2009

    Thanks guys..

  • julianhw on Dec 13, 2009

    Short and sweet – nice!

  • trios2009 on Dec 13, 2009

    Beautiful…

  • Midie on Dec 13, 2009

    So short, I don’t get satisfied yet.:P

  • jaysonv on Dec 13, 2009

    lol.. its short but meaningful.. isn’t it?

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 13, 2009

    Lovely words. Well done.

    Christine

  • vnosyaj on Dec 13, 2009

    thanks Christine.. ur articles too are very lovely..

  • ladydryle on Dec 13, 2009

    love it….blue is my favorite color…

  • jaysonv on Dec 13, 2009

    thanks Christine and Ladydryle.. blue is my favorite color also..

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 13, 2009

    Short and sweet you gave me a beautiful treat.

  • Sunitha Stalin on Dec 14, 2009

    Good one

  • jaysonv on Dec 14, 2009

    Thankz..

  • jaysonv on Dec 14, 2009

    Thanks a lot Terry and Sunitha.

  • Kris Mendoza on Dec 16, 2009

    Very very heartfelt poem. I like it.

  • PR Mace on Dec 16, 2009

    Well written verses.

  • jaysonv on Dec 18, 2009

    Thanks PR..

  • ladydryle on Dec 20, 2009

    well done, short yet meaningful…

  • Jean France on Dec 21, 2009

    ur such a great poet with great poem very inspiring..

  • Jerelyn on Dec 21, 2009

    i love this poem very much..

  • George Mendoza on Dec 21, 2009

    nice poem.. i really like it. Thanks to you.

  • jaysonv on Dec 22, 2009

    terimah kasih! love you all guys..

  • jaysonv on Dec 26, 2009

    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND ADVANCE HAPPY NEW YEAR TRIONDERS!!! :)

  • jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009

    keep on publishing interesting articles guys! Thanks.. Happy New Year everyone!

  • Mihai on Oct 26, 2010

    Hi,
    Quick question if I may: Where did you get the photo that represents this post on your blog? I mean, the blue eye.
    Thank you for your reply.
    Regards,
    Mihai

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