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Her Essence Binds with Mine

TroostAvenue on Nov 10, 2009
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She mingles with my every part.

She is the very air I breath
She mingles with every part of me
Her essence binds with mine
We are as if one together

Her love flows through me with my blood
My heartbeat is rhythm for her voice singing
My pulse her touching me throughout
She is the sweetness that I am tasting

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009

    That was very passionate. thanks for sharing.

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 10, 2009

    Nope, I didnt like it…because you said Air i breathe, which is again, overused. You said “blinds” instead of binds. You really ought to check your spelling in your poems. And her love circulates with my blood is just plain weird.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem!

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