Feels like satin against his flesh.

He inhales the sweet enticing fragrance

of her beautiful strawberry scented hair.

The silky smooth raven colored strands

shine in the sun with a glowing sheen.

Her hair lightly caresses his sensitive skin

with delicately soft and tender strokes.

The sensual strands of her long black hair

feels like satin against his heated flesh.

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Comments (9)
  • Silent Writer on Feb 11, 2009

    This is beautiful Darla, as always, keep writing =)

  • M Stokes on Feb 11, 2009

    Well written!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 11, 2009

    thanks for reading so many so quickly and ur A FANTASTIC POET are u into the publishing line u r so fast and quick too also to the point . thanks again.
    lovely honey

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 11, 2009

    Very sensually put. I enjoyed it!!

  • Mermush on Feb 11, 2009

    Hey darla….wow…u jus made hair the sexiest part of anyone’s body…i liked it.

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 11, 2009

    Wow, this is stunning, Darla.

  • Yovita Siswati on Feb 11, 2009

    agree with Mermush, this poem is sexy.

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Feb 12, 2009

    Lovely, Darla! It’s nice to see the softer side. :)

    -M

  • ladywiltse on Feb 12, 2009

    Very nice! I am new at this you may want to check it out and give me pros and cons. Would be appreciated.

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