Saying "I love you" can be mesmerizing.

Her Love Whispers

Her words deafen the sound, to the world all around,

It echoes in my mind, of the words she left behind,

As she whispered in my ear, that I love you my dear,

Unable to think, as my eyes started to blink,

Trap in this illusion, which provides this fusion,

My heart flooder, because I know theirs no other,

As to that night, our love took flight,

Knowing that she will always be, that one for me,

As I cling to these words, only to preserve,

Her love whispers

  

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  • Joie Schmidt on Sep 13, 2010

    So beautiful!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 13, 2010

    Beautiful poem! Good job :)

  • babyishinilej on Sep 20, 2010

    So sweet.. very inspiring.

  • Ima Vee on Sep 21, 2010

    absolutely touching…

  • T. S. Lewis on Sep 24, 2010

    Nice last line. I enjoyed this.

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