This poem describes a girl who saw no way of experiencing happiness. Then she finds out that there is hope. Hope you enjoy! please like, share and leave your comments. Thank you!

Reaching out for that knob,

To open the door and end this continuous sob.

Daily feelings of loss of hope,

Hourly! Minutely! Secondly!, the sun, she can see no more.

Even when the outside world is bright and sunny,

Her days are filled with rain and are gloomy.

At times she wonders “will I ever smile again”,

“Or must this wretched life I end.”

Moving on can at times be hard,

But if she could just have someone reaching out to her palm.

Then she realizes that it is just a season of molting,

Like an eagle as it looses its feathers.

Then across that mountain she must soar,

Soaring in triumph of the battles she has overcome!

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  • holdkunal on Aug 26, 2011

    so nice to read this..

  • Kayale Olatunde on Aug 26, 2011

    dave,,go hard bro (Y)

  • Dave John on Aug 26, 2011

    Thanks guys !

  • carlton on Aug 26, 2011

    im impressed bro, u deserves a medal, keep striving towards excellence, u can make it..proud of u..may his peace continue to be with u..kool

  • Dave John on Aug 28, 2011

    thank you !

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