She feels like she is losing a great love is there any chance he will stay.

Her only chance

was fading

the brown eyes 

large hands

algerian arabic accent

he was becoming 

bitter

Her only chance 

was listening to

rap and refusing

to get on yahoo

she called him

“allo” He said

she hung up

her only chance

was bored with her

and she was 

still

so

much in love with him.

How can she keep the man

who said “I love you.” 

How can she make him

STOP

hurting her feelings

God he was beautiful

brown eyes

Tawny skin

how she wanted him

Her only chance

she sits down 

at the pc

And sobs

She really loves him

what does he feel ?

Is it online and off

or disconnected

God she loves him 

algerian prince.

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  • Joie Schmidt on Apr 28, 2010

    Nice work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

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