He should not hold on to tight. He want let me go.

He’s holding on too tight, want let me go

He’s thinking, I’m going to put up a fight, “NOT”

It’s up to him to make it right or

He can get out of my sight.

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  • LoveDoctor on Apr 7, 2010

    Good for you. You need freedom and space to be who you are. This sounds like a controlling guy.

  • Frances Lawrence on Apr 7, 2010

    We all need freedom to be our own person.

  • diamondpoet on Apr 7, 2010

    He’s smart he know what he has. good post.

  • Lord Banks on Apr 7, 2010

    Addoration can turn into possesiveness, a warning to us all, LB

  • Jenna Christiansen on Apr 7, 2010

    Yes, this happens… we all need our space…. good one…

  • Olive B. on Apr 7, 2010

    personal space needed! good job.

  • yes me on Apr 7, 2010

    Time n space…. cheers

  • jamesII on Apr 7, 2010

    Want too much–Gone!

  • Tina Cassello on Apr 7, 2010

    This is good. You need to let him know how you feel before you fight. Then, if he doesn’t listen you may need to get away from him. Like a couple of your other commenter’said, he could be controlling and possessive and therefore dangerous.

  • Wylrhyss Terrado RN on Apr 8, 2010

    This is a common tale. Especially in romance, where things are not working out, yet there is one holding on. Relationship is not done alone, it is done together with a partner. It is better to define a girl-boy relationship as partnership. Both of them should hold, and play their roles perfectly.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 8, 2010

    Hope he gets the point right.

  • 8Shei8 on Apr 8, 2010

    Good entry…this relationship needs to breathe :)

  • Will Gray on Apr 10, 2010

    You go, girl!

  • poof7 on Apr 20, 2010

    You know when a relationship goes south and one person says it’s not going to work but sends signals that they want it to…that is so hard to be on the other end of it. That’s my case now. I want to give my x her space but at the same time it feels like I am failing our future if I don’t try…

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