Hi You rule.If you Rule read this.

Hey you rule.I’m cool and your also cool.Were friends so lets talk and walk.while you do the chalk and i do the lock.So please join me in this rhyme.I Like to walk you like to talk i do the chalk and you do the lock.We both say hi than we say bye.You love the books but i like my looks and you took my look so i say bye than hi.

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  • hamon123 on Jul 21, 2010

    its ok but its to much for little kids. anyone agree?

  • Kiddy on Jul 23, 2010

    It\’s good. If you have given breaks at right place it would have been better.

    Keep writing, mate!

    Luv and regards
    -Kiddy

  • Erin Miller on Jul 23, 2010

    Hmmm… It’s catchy nonetheless.

  • michaelgolez13 on Jul 25, 2010

    No!

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