Do you have any friends that say one thing, but inact something entirely different. I guess the phrase would be two-faced.

Your too quick to respond.
Tell me what is going on.
You keep says this and that.
Finicky as a kitty cat.
Wheeling, sneaking double-dealing.
I think you playing with my feelings.
Your so quick to react.
Why are you on a defensive attack.
You don’t really have my back.
I won’t continue to give you slack.
You are slippery as an eel.
Stop speaking so fast and keep it real.
Every time I try to speak.
Your reaction surely reeks.
Something must be eating at you.
I just feel your friendship isn’t true.
Just in case you weren’t listening.
I’ll pretend you are doing this with no intention.

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Comments (11)
  • Darla Cooke on Oct 7, 2009

    Yes, I’ve had friends like that.

  • Sourav on Oct 7, 2009

    There are people like that every where. So beware of them!

  • Lavia on Oct 7, 2009

    Yes! I think everyone has had a least one friend like this. I love your metaphors. Thank you for sharing.

  • diamondpoet on Oct 7, 2009

    I have had a lot of bad experiences, so I don’t get reeled in too quickly, thank you Sourav.

  • LilRoastBeef on Oct 7, 2009

    I really enjoyed this poem..good JOB!!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 7, 2009

    the world is full of such folks take CARE DOuBLY

  • Sarah Sullins on Oct 7, 2009

    I do have friends like this. I liked this poem : )

  • MohammadG on Oct 7, 2009

    Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Oct 7, 2009

    That’s creative. Keep it up!

  • Steven West on Oct 7, 2009

    You put your feelings right out for us to see. Well done.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 8, 2009

    I really liked your poem. It is really easy to relate to your poem because most of us have had friends like that at one time or another.

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