Written back in early 80’s while I was in college over a girl.

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High as a Dove

I was flying high as a dove

Thought I could do without your love

But now I’ve been shot down

And you are nowhere aroun’

.

What am I going to do?

What am I going to do?

I have no one to help me

With love I just can’t see

.

I need so much help

And no one can give me help

Except you alone

And you won’t even phone

.

I was flying high as a dove

Thought I could do without your love

But now I just can’t fly

Baby I don’t want to die

.

What am I going to do?

What am I going to do?

Oh, baby I am alone

I’m just out of the zone

.

Please bring love to me

So that I will ever be

Maybe together

I won’t worry ever

.

I was flying high as a dove

Thought I could do without your love

But now I’ve been shot down

And you are nowhere aroun’

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Dragon and the Mermaid

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  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 7, 2009

    These sound as if they could be the lyrics of a song. You’ll have to put music to it. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 7, 2009

    Very nice!

  • fragile18 on Oct 7, 2009

    nice work. :)

  • emmahaynes on Oct 7, 2009

    Great Work Milty! I loved it, crazy how you were so good back then too!

  • emmahaynes on Oct 7, 2009

    Great work! I can’t believe you were this good all those years ago!

  • Eric Goode on Oct 7, 2009

    I agree. This would make a good song.

  • Linda Lori on Oct 8, 2009

    Great poem! Some of the best are written when so full of emotion…

  • raptor22 on Oct 12, 2009

    Wonderful poem.

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