This is the short version. I don’t think you can handle the trip to Cincinnati.

Composing emotion

Using metaphors as a median

A race with words

To make your body feel driven

Trails of emission,

Beginning at your feet

Messaging the tread

Releasing tension from the day

My mouth is an aphrodisiac

Allow satisfaction to fuel your mind

Gently swallowing all of your toes

With a warm lip wrap

Revving up your engine

The tip of pronunciation

 Ascending down the lane

Ticklish and bearable

No need for lane change

Anticipation builds

As my tongue starts to skid

Always enjoying

The way foreplay is made

Moistness dampens the street

So speed is reduced

Heading towards thighs

Where experience glides

Rounding the first turn

Hugging the left corner

Jettison past with centrifugal force

Hitting the straight away

To thunder your days

Entering the next turn

Letting up on the gas

Time my hands

As they work in your pit stop

Caressing hips

With ambidextrous ability

Cruising behind

Opening up on the throttle

Shift gears with automatic ease

You display a checkered flag

But I’m sorry baby

There’s still ten laps to go…

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Comments (13)
  • LoveDoctor on Feb 5, 2010

    Lol. You got me in the mood. Excellent imagery and poem.

  • Jenilia12 on Feb 5, 2010

    good stuff, interesting to read..

  • drelayaraja on Feb 5, 2010

    Wonderful and lovely write. Loved it.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 5, 2010

    I have been living in the wrong city :)

  • Anupam Kachroo on Feb 6, 2010

    woo , tht was a roller coaster ride …. gr8

  • lillyrose on Feb 6, 2010

    Hey… very clever! LOVED IT

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 6, 2010

    Interesting poem!

  • AlmaG on Feb 6, 2010

    Beautiful!

  • clickmarbin on Feb 7, 2010

    thanks for this nice poem

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 7, 2010

    Wonderful…very nice…

  • diamondpoet on Feb 7, 2010

    That was cute and clever all rolled into one, great post.

  • Yolilo on Feb 9, 2010

    Wonderful. The first lap was fantastic!

  • ladydryle on Feb 10, 2010

    so beautiful…highway of love…

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