Failure will lead you to anger & depression because things aren’t going the way you want it to be. Without the firm belief that whatever goal you wish to attain, it is in your grasp if you believe and embrace the presence of God.

Make your visions on high

Set your goal that will guide you up high

But success is not easy to achieve

Unless you sincerely invest on it

Hindrances will gradually comes your way

Negative thoughts and several doubts,

Envious, deceitful, liars & traitors are some

But keep on moving until you are totally done

Ignore efforts of others to dissuade you

Don’t rely on your pervious ego-oriented beliefs

Let your affection concentrate on your bliss

And remind yourself that you’re not the only one who will benefit.

Motivate yourself into maturity

Follow your hearts desire and never quit

Life is queer with its twists and turns
As every one of us sometimes learns

You will be surprise with what you’ve accomplished

Since every achievement you’ve made there’s a corresponding gift

Your ability and inspirations that made you strong

Failure that came along will turn into triumph.

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Comments (11)
  • papaleng on Mar 17, 2009

    nicely written and you set the the message straight.

  • kate smedley on Mar 17, 2009

    An inspirational message in this.

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 17, 2009

    Your work speaks for its self! Great Job!

  • butterflysects on Mar 17, 2009

    a triumphant message, it gives me bless full morning..:-)

  • monica55 on Mar 17, 2009

    A great message for all.
    Monica

  • rutherfranc on Mar 17, 2009

    so true.. is that Joan of Arc? great choice of an example..

  • Vanessa on Mar 18, 2009

    hi bro;great job! really inspiring.

  • eirol on Mar 19, 2009

    how i wish its that easy…. optimism.. y not?

  • Lauren Axelrod on Mar 21, 2009

    \”Negative thoughts and several doubts,

    Envious, deceitful, liars & traitors are some

    But keep on moving until you are totally done\”

    My favorite section and how true it really is. A well done piece my friend.

  • Carolyn Ann Aish on Mar 21, 2009

    Yes! It is about NOT QUITTING! Failures are ways NOT to do it — I call all failures, STEPPING STONES — they are stepping stones to SUCCESS!!

  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 27, 2009

    a very positive poem full of life. i love the stone rider on the horse too. he/she is like a conquistador

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