A poem about wondering…

 

She walked into the room,
He already feel asleep it seems.
She sets down upon the bed,
She watched him as he dreams.
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She frowns as she wonders,
Who does he dream about.
She wonders if it could be her,
As she has a look of doubt.
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He doesn’t hold her anymore,
The way he use to do.
His eyes no longer sparkles,
He never says “I love you”
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As she lays down,
With a tear in her eye.
She tries to hold the tears back,
She doesn’t want to cry.
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Then without warning,
He pulls her to his chest.
He whispers “I love you”
To me you’ll always be the best.

~Collette~
©Copyright 04-20-02

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  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 17, 2009

    Aww…the ending was so sweet! We shouldn’t neglect our partners, for it can cause great misunderstandings.

  • alc on Aug 17, 2009

    Nicely put and very nice ending!!!! Great write!!!

  • ken bultman on Aug 17, 2009

    I love happy endings. Just like a fairy tale.

  • ashan1614 on Aug 17, 2009

    This has a much nicer ending than my poem “Dream” (lol!).

    Check it out at: http://authspot.com/poetry/dream-58/

  • Marie Milton on Aug 18, 2009

    …a happy ever after tale…heheha…I love it : ) You choose such goo pictures for your poems too : )

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 18, 2009

    That’s so sweet.

  • giftarist on Aug 18, 2009

    Cute and sweet!

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