A factory worker is shot then robbed….

A second shift factory worker

sitting at the loading dock,

eyes on the time clock,

someone once told him

in order to get a head in life

you had to work hard, they lied,

his last meal was a two-piece extra crispy

from a local Kentucky Fried,

he was robbed then shot,

they found him on the rain-soaked

parking lot,

sanity would halt,

his wallet gone,

and the content from one pocket

spread all over the asphalt,

the chicken dinner lying in a puddle

near his head,

once vibrant, now dead,

his future would stall,

a witness heard the gunshot

and he saw the victim fall,

but the sixty five year old witness was nearsighted,

and he could provide no description,

better than three young males,

as his eyesight fails.

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Comments (7)
  • LoveDoctor on Jul 25, 2011

    This is very sad and inhumane. I don’t think anyone deserves for this to happen. That was great imagery: the crispy chicken lying in the puddle. That’s why there’s pepper spray.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 26, 2011

    Unfortunately this is becoming so common in life these days. A sad but well written poem.

  • Ms marie fine on Jul 26, 2011

    You are awesome!!!!

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jul 27, 2011

    Your poetry is very good – graphic but good.

  • yes me on Jul 27, 2011

    Another great post Frank cheers

  • PruandMe on Jul 30, 2011

    Not what I was expecting . . . well done

  • Atanacio on Feb 13, 2012

    thanks for reading guys :)

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